[Grammar] Answers to save money when you choose software.

[olegc]

Hey.

There are few versions of sentence. Please advice me, hich of them is correct?

1. Answers to save money when you choose software.

2. Answers that save money when you choose software.

3. Answers which save money when you choose software.

Or maybe is there other variant?

Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]Hey.[/STRIKE] That's a little informal for people you don't know. If you want to open with a greeting, use "Hello."

[STRIKE]There[/STRIKE] Here are a few versions of a sentence. Please [STRIKE]advice[/STRIKE] advise me no comma here which of them is correct?

1. Answers to save money when you choose software.
2. Answers that save money when you choose software.
3. Answers which save money when you choose software.

[STRIKE]Or maybe[/STRIKE] Is there another variant?

Thanks.

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please note my comments and corrections above. None of your examples is a complete sentence. Where are you planning to use these fragments?

 

[olegc]

Hello emsr2d2 and thank you for answer.
Sorry for my poor English. This is subject of my email message to subscribed people. In this email i am going to describe about questions that are important when people want to select software scripts. May be better to write :


1. Questions to save money when you choose software.
2. Questions that save money when you choose software.
3. Questions which save money when you choose software.

???

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello, emsr2d2, and thank you for your answer.

[STRIKE]Sorry for my poor English.[/STRIKE] There's no need to apologise. You're here to learn.

This is the subject line of [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] an email [STRIKE]message[/STRIKE] to my [STRIKE]subscribed people[/STRIKE] subscribers. In this email, I am going to describe [STRIKE]about[/STRIKE] questions that are important when people want to select software scripts. It [STRIKE]May[/STRIKE] might be better to write the following:

1. Questions to ask in order to save money when you choose software.
2. Questions that can help you save money when you choose software.
3. Questions [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] that could save you money when you choose software.

[STRIKE]???[/STRIKE]

See my corrections (in red) and comments (in blue) above.

 

[olegc]

Many thanks. Hope this post will not be corrected.

 

[Rover_KE]

Many thanks. I hope this post will not be corrected.

;-)

 

[emsr2d2]

Olegc, note that I have changed your thread title (I forgot to do it when I wrote my first response). Thread titles should be unique and relevant to the thread, and should include some/all of the words/phrases/sentences you are asking us about. The actual question should appear only in the main body of your text.