Sir, thank you for your reply.
When one learns something, one is bound to make mistakes.So,I don't worry about committing mistakes and at least I have the courage to commit those, of course not deliberately, without the fear of being pointed out.
Of course. We all make mistakes when learning something. I makes lots of mistakes in Spanish, and when I'm learning the Tango. But if I do something which is wrong, and I ask my teacher if it's right, I expect her to tell me "No".
and as far as the sentences are concerned, I somewhat know the correct form of telling but I just want to know whether it can be put it in another way.
Yes, I do that too. But I still expect to be corrected when I do something wrong, especially if I'm only trying out something on a whim, without giving my teacher a clue that this is what I'm doing - which, to me, is what you seem to be doing. If my teacher knows why I'm doing it, she is more likely to be able to correct me usefully, rather than just to tell me not to do it.
1) I hate anything troubles me.(I hate anything that troubles me)
I wanted to know whether it was possible without "that".
It might be more useful to say what you are attempting. That way, you might get a better response. If you just give an incorrect sentence, and ask if it's right, all one can do is say, "Not, it's not."
4)When do such thoughts start germinating in your mind from?
From when do such thoughts start germinating in your mind?
The problem with the original is that it suggests that you mean both "When" and "From where".
5)Don't make(or allow) such thoughts to get into our mind.
(I do not know How to put this. Please help me with this)
What do you want to say? I can think of two possibilities. 1) "Don't indoctrinate us" (put thought into our heads) 2. "Protect us from corruption" (Don't allow someone to put such thoughts into our mind).
6)Do you think, am I presentable? Do you think, I am presentable? This is also wrong.
I knew the correct one but it is what said in the movie.
A correct sentence might be "Do you think I am presentable?" There's no comma.
P.s your corrections is always very helpful sir.
Thank you.