kadioguy
Key Member
- Joined
- Mar 4, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
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Information for Customers:
Please look through our new brochure. Starting on page 4, in our Food and Otink section, you will find titles of interest for professional chefs and food lovers in both commercial and private kitchens. Our Travel and Tourism section on page 6 includes travel guides and phrase books to assist you wherever you visit this autumn. For all the latest on commercial and residential construction, see our selection of Design and Archtieoture titles (page 8). Renowned experts highlight the most recent business trends in the Management and Business section, along with The Sales and Marketing Encyclopedia, which is publicly recognizes as the best seller of the year beginning on page 10.
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I think that there should be a comma before "beginning on page 10". I mean, that part seems to refer to "the Management and Business section", so adding a comma would make that clearer.
What do you think?
Joel Bookstore
Autumn Selection Brochure
Autumn Selection Brochure
Information for Customers:
Please look through our new brochure. Starting on page 4, in our Food and Otink section, you will find titles of interest for professional chefs and food lovers in both commercial and private kitchens. Our Travel and Tourism section on page 6 includes travel guides and phrase books to assist you wherever you visit this autumn. For all the latest on commercial and residential construction, see our selection of Design and Archtieoture titles (page 8). Renowned experts highlight the most recent business trends in the Management and Business section, along with The Sales and Marketing Encyclopedia, which is publicly recognizes as the best seller of the year beginning on page 10.
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I think that there should be a comma before "beginning on page 10". I mean, that part seems to refer to "the Management and Business section", so adding a comma would make that clearer.
What do you think?