[General] change the situation to teach kids idiomatic English

[Silverobama]

I was hosting a local English club for kids. Now, my friend Gary, starts a new English club for kids. Gary and I both believe that the only way to help kids learn is to teach them idiomaitc English because teachers here at schools use Chinglish materials and wrong expressions. I once wanted to change the situation by hosting that English club for kids but for many reasons, I stopped running that club. Now, Gary starts a new one so I told some of my friends who are parents and interested "I believe Gary can change the situation to teach kids idiomatic English".

Is my italic sentence natural?

 

[emsr2d2]

I [STRIKE]was hosting[/STRIKE] used to host a local English club for kids. Now, my friend Gary no comma here [STRIKE]starts[/STRIKE] has started a new [strike]English club for kids[/strike] one. Gary and I both believe that the only way to help kids learn is to teach them idiomatic English; [STRIKE]because[/STRIKE] most teachers [STRIKE]here[/STRIKE] at schools here use Chinglish materials and [STRIKE]wrong expressions[/STRIKE] incorrect vocabulary/grammar. I [STRIKE]once[/STRIKE] wanted to change the situation by hosting [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] an English club for kids but, for many reasons, I stopped running [STRIKE]that club[/STRIKE] it. Now, Gary [STRIKE]starts[/STRIKE] has started a new one so I told some of my friends, who are parents and interested in his club, "I believe Gary can change the situation [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] by teaching kids idiomatic English".

Is my italic sentence natural?

emsr2d2

 

[Tdol]

Change the game?

 

[Rover_KE]

FYI, Silver, many BE speakers prefer to call youngsters children, pupils, teenagers or students rather than kids.