Could you check my message for grammatical mistakes and informal style, please?) Her

[MariaFreshSound]

Greetings to you chelleve.My name is Maria Deidrick,I am from Jamaica St Elizebeth,but is living in Birmingham England.Frist I must say I commend you for the good work you are doing in the body of Christ. Which is why I am messaging you.I am an independent gospel singer/song writter and is hoping to record a single in jamaica in December.,heard of your studio and is interested in doing it there,so if that is possible I would really appreciate it if you would let me know.Thanks in advance

 

[emsr2d2]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

The first thing you should do is click on "Edit Post" and add a space after every full stop and comma. Then click Save.