Even though you're stoked about the just

[NamelessKing]

Please correct my sentences. Are they natural?

Even though you're stoked about the just released VR headset from Oculus and can't wait to lay your hands on it, you'll have to wait at least three months until your uncle comes back from the US bringing it over. I'm convinced that the novelty will have worn off by then.

 

[GoesStation]

Please correct my sentences. Are they natural?

Even though you're stoked about the just-released VR headset from Oculus and can't wait to lay your hands on it, you'll have to wait at least three months until your uncle comes back from the US bringing it over. I'm convinced [that] the novelty will have worn off by then.

See above. "That" is optional in the second sentence.

 

[Rover_KE]

I have moved your thread.

When you want your own writing to be edited or proofread, please post it here in Editing & Writing Topics.

 

[NamelessKing]

See above. "That" is optional in the second sentence.

Compound adjectives always take a hyphen, right?

 

[emsr2d2]

If the adjective comes before the noun to which it refers, yes.