GirlSensation
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I am studying for KGL English Olympiad Stage 2 and there is a writing part that I want to practice. May you review my letter of complaint example?
Dear Mr. Collinson,
I am writing this letter to give feedback on your restaurant regarding food prices in your menu. In my opinion, I think the prices were too high for the meals on the menu. Most of them cost $70-$80, which is normal in a fine dining restaurant, however, yours take a bistro style and it demands too much for the customer. This made my peers and I order the fried chicken meal instead which rates at $45.
Also, when my four friends and I just arrived at the restaurant, we had to wait for twenty minutes even though empty slots were open for us. The receptionist entertained the other customers and forgot that we actually reserved first. Luckily, one of the waitresses told him to admit me and my friends. I hope that you will improve your customer service once reading our feedback.
Respectfully Yours,
Ms. Villanueva
Dear Mr. Collinson,
I am writing this letter to give feedback on your restaurant regarding food prices in your menu. In my opinion, I think the prices were too high for the meals on the menu. Most of them cost $70-$80, which is normal in a fine dining restaurant, however, yours take a bistro style and it demands too much for the customer. This made my peers and I order the fried chicken meal instead which rates at $45.
Also, when my four friends and I just arrived at the restaurant, we had to wait for twenty minutes even though empty slots were open for us. The receptionist entertained the other customers and forgot that we actually reserved first. Luckily, one of the waitresses told him to admit me and my friends. I hope that you will improve your customer service once reading our feedback.
Respectfully Yours,
Ms. Villanueva