[General] have already been finalised/ have already done

[Economist2010]

1- I hope that the changes to the role that I have been interviewed for have already been done and looking forward to the next step of the process.

2- I am writing to you check whether the changes to the role that I have been interviewed for have already been finalised and wonder if I can know that changes and to move forward to the next steps of the process.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

1- I hope that the changes to the role that I have been interviewed for are done. I'm looking forward to the next step of the process.

2- I am writing to [STRIKE]you[/STRIKE] check whether the changes to the role that I [STRIKE]have been[/STRIKE] interviewed for are finalised and find out what they are so we can move forward to the next steps of the process.

There!

 

[Economist2010]

Did you see the changes I suggested for your Linkedin blurb?

Thanks Charlie. I saw your kind suggestion.

I would like to edit the above paragraph as follows:


- I am writing to check whether the changes to the role that I interviewed for are finalised. If yes, Appreciate it if you could let me know what they are so we can move forward to the next steps of the process.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Thanks Charlie. I saw your kind suggestion.

I would like to edit the above paragraph as follows:


- I am writing to check whether the changes to the role that I interviewed for are finalised. If so, I would appreciate it if you could let me know what they are so we can move forward to the next steps of the process.

Better!

Here's a question for the other advisors here. Which of these do you prefer?:

- I would appreciate you letting me know

- I would appreciate your letting me know

 

[rodgers white]

The first one. I don't know why. It's my instinct response to your question. By the way, I am not an advisor here.:-D

 

[emsr2d2]

Better!

Here's a question for the other advisors here. Which of these do you prefer?:

- I would appreciate you letting me know

- I would appreciate your letting me know

It might depend on just how formal I wanted to be. If I were contacting a prospective employer, for example, I'd use the second. In most other circumstances, I'd use either the first or I'd say "I would/I'd appreciate it if you could/would let me know [asap]".