[General] I believe famine comes.....

[Silverobama]

I will give a speech tomorrow and I want to talk about "food waste" in China. I can't accept all these things when I see there are so many food left on most restaurants' tables. I know there are many countries in history don't have enough food and war took place later. I believe if we keep waste food, people become hungry, famine come and war ensues. I write a sentence to express the idea:

I believe firmly famine comes ahead of war. So if we keep wasting food, we're just waging wars.

Is the sentence natural?

 

[emsr2d2]

I will give a speech tomorrow and I want to talk about no quotation marks here food waste no quotation marks here in China. I can't accept [STRIKE]all these things[/STRIKE] it when I see [STRIKE]there are[/STRIKE] so [STRIKE]many[/STRIKE] much food left on most restaurants' tables. I know there are many countries where, in [STRIKE]history[/STRIKE] the past, [STRIKE]don't have[/STRIKE] there wasn't enough food and a war took place [STRIKE]later[/STRIKE] soon after. I believe [that] if we keep wasting food, people will become hungry, famine will come and war [STRIKE]ensues[/STRIKE] will ensue.

I [STRIKE]write[/STRIKE] have written a sentence to express the idea:

I firmly believe [STRIKE]firmly[/STRIKE] [that] famine comes ahead of war. [STRIKE]So[/STRIKE] If we keep wasting food, we're just [STRIKE]waging[/STRIKE] encouraging/risking wars.

Is the sentence natural?

emsr2d2