Silverobama
Key Member
- Joined
- Aug 8, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi,
I wrote the following short paragraph:
I choose to work as a tutor because I want to shape my vision for the future, learning how to satisfy students' needs at different levels: Some students are in elementary school, and I can learn how to cope with them. Others are in high school, and I can learn what they need. All are very beneficial for development of my teaching skills.
I remember I wrote this in 2012, at that time I was just beginning to work as a tutor. However, when I wrote this, I already had worked as a tutor for a while.
a) I wonder if "chose" would be better instead of "choose".
b) I wonder if I need to say "visions" here.
c) I wonder if I need to use "schools" here because I use "students" in the sentence.
d) I wonder if "skill" is better than "skills".
I wrote the following short paragraph:
I choose to work as a tutor because I want to shape my vision for the future, learning how to satisfy students' needs at different levels: Some students are in elementary school, and I can learn how to cope with them. Others are in high school, and I can learn what they need. All are very beneficial for development of my teaching skills.
I remember I wrote this in 2012, at that time I was just beginning to work as a tutor. However, when I wrote this, I already had worked as a tutor for a while.
a) I wonder if "chose" would be better instead of "choose".
b) I wonder if I need to say "visions" here.
c) I wonder if I need to use "schools" here because I use "students" in the sentence.
d) I wonder if "skill" is better than "skills".