alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello.
I want to suggest a person was trying to make a decision and they could feel others were speaking to him.
Are these correct and natural?
1. I was torn whether to forgive her or not. I could hear a million conflicting voices in my head. My vindictive father was telling me to get even, my mom telling me to forgive and move on.
2. With each decision I wanted to make I felt like my head was full of conflicting voices telling me what to do.
How can I make them better?
I want to suggest a person was trying to make a decision and they could feel others were speaking to him.
Are these correct and natural?
1. I was torn whether to forgive her or not. I could hear a million conflicting voices in my head. My vindictive father was telling me to get even, my mom telling me to forgive and move on.
2. With each decision I wanted to make I felt like my head was full of conflicting voices telling me what to do.
How can I make them better?