[Vocabulary] I need some help with this..correcting mistakes

[wisdomx]

I used google !!! but I rewrote again still having improper words..




1. SUMMARY

The changes caused by the developments In technology In current century are now beIng felt more than ever and profoundly affectIng human lIfe. One of the major areas that Is affected by these changes Is educatIon. EspecIally, due to the development In educatIon and communIcatIons technologIes
To use thIs technology effIcIently and accurately Is an Important problem for the students, teachers and parents
When consIderIng the Impact of medIa on socIety, medIa lIteracy should be evaluated as a skIll whIch starts from an early age and extends to lIfelong and a traInIng wIll also be gIven to a process leadIng to the spread of adult educatIon, startIng from pre-school.




I am not sure about the parts bolded

 

[Tarheel]

When will you be turning this in to your teacher?

 

[wisdomx]

No ı am not a student. I just wanted to help a friend..

 

[Tarheel]

When will your friend be handing it in?

 

[wisdomx]

tomorrow...ten hours later

 

[wisdomx]

please ,do some modification will you?

 

[Tarheel]

We're not supposed to do anybody's homework. If there any questions after the work has been turned in, ask them.

 

[emsr2d2]

As Tarheel said, we don't help with homework or assignments. Your friend needs to submit his/her own work, without any help so that the teacher can see where the problems are.

If your friend wants help (with things that aren't homework), I suggest he/she joins this forum.

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