Rachel Adams
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
Isn't it wrong to list interesting places as in text A?
A: "There are so many unusual and beautiful places in the world I can't name the best. One of the famous places is Venice in Italy, Paris in France, the Tianzi mountains in China. It's also beautiful there. The Nasca lines in Peru, Thor's well in the USA, Lake Hillier in Western Australia."
I removed "in" after "other places" in B. Should it be removed before Italy, France and China?
B: "There are so many unusual and beautiful places in the world I can't name the best. One of the famous places is Venice in Italy, Paris in France, the Tianzi mountains in China. It's also beautiful there. Other places are The Nasca lines, Peru, Thor's well, The USA, Lake Hillier, Western Australia."
A: "There are so many unusual and beautiful places in the world I can't name the best. One of the famous places is Venice in Italy, Paris in France, the Tianzi mountains in China. It's also beautiful there. The Nasca lines in Peru, Thor's well in the USA, Lake Hillier in Western Australia."
I removed "in" after "other places" in B. Should it be removed before Italy, France and China?
B: "There are so many unusual and beautiful places in the world I can't name the best. One of the famous places is Venice in Italy, Paris in France, the Tianzi mountains in China. It's also beautiful there. Other places are The Nasca lines, Peru, Thor's well, The USA, Lake Hillier, Western Australia."