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[Tarheel]

It may be another American English/British English difference. I said: fine WITH me. @emsr2d2 said: fine BY me. Hm.

@goodboybkk Please note the corrections/suggestions. You need to make some changes.

 

[goodboybkk]

I am sorry and have a good day for all of you!

 

[Tarheel]

@goodboybkk It's getting late here. (11:10). I'll get some rest now.

Tell me if you want me to continue making suggestions.