ripley
Senior Member
- Joined
- Sep 25, 2004
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
Hi; at first I decided to write the text dividing it into sentences for correction, but then I understood that without the the links the correction may not be complete; so I decided to show you the whole text. I hope someone can help. A friend of mine wrote it and I told her I would ask my teachers on line to check it.
Thanks.
Rip
"Here I am, I feel you, my passion is starting out. Talk to me, I was born to live, to have you now. There’s only us, me and you.
Now please have me as you have always done; give me those shivers I like and need so much.
You are the drug I have always wanted.
You stay there in front of me; look at me and listen to me. I’m here to make you feel and let you know my emotions.
I’m here for you. It's you who give me the strength to stand up every day, to be really what I am.
Thanks.
Rip
"Here I am, I feel you, my passion is starting out. Talk to me, I was born to live, to have you now. There’s only us, me and you.
Now please have me as you have always done; give me those shivers I like and need so much.
You are the drug I have always wanted.
You stay there in front of me; look at me and listen to me. I’m here to make you feel and let you know my emotions.
I’m here for you. It's you who give me the strength to stand up every day, to be really what I am.