It's small writing. Please everyone fix it? Thanks.

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

There is a man who was very rich.
He could buy any thing by money. However, He felt unhappy about that.
One day, he came up with a bizarre idea, bring all valuables, gold, and then go travel on the world. He decided who can tell him how to happy and then he would give money for that.

 

[emsr2d2]

What is the purpose of your short piece of writing? What are you going to do with it when it's finished?

 

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

I do not ask about short piece of writing which I want to find error on it.

 

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

As gammar, words...

 

[emsr2d2]

I do not ask about short piece of writing which I want to find error on it.

You did ask us about your short essay (piece of writing).

As gammar, words...

This is not grammatical.

​Please tell us why you wrote the "small writing". Is it homework?

 

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

Yes, It is

 

[emsr2d2]

We don't help with homework here. Read the forum rules again. Your teacher wants to see your work, not ours.

Good luck with your homework. After your teacher has seen it, marked it and made corrections, you can come back to us if there are any comments or corrections you don't understand.

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