alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Jack slumped onto the battered couch. They stared at each other blankly for a few seconds before Sara broke the silence. "Would you like some tea?", she asked, her voice flat and expressionless.
"I'm good. I just need some air." Jack struggled to his feet and trudged towards the window. He struggled with the creaky handle to open the window. A soft wind brought smog and noise inside their living room. In the old days, they would argue about the window but Sara was beyond caring. She just looked at Jack with vacant eyes and she knew. They were still married but their passionate marriage was long gone.
Jack slumped onto the battered couch. They stared at each other blankly for a few seconds before Sara broke the silence. "Would you like some tea?", she asked, her voice flat and expressionless.
"I'm good. I just need some air." Jack struggled to his feet and trudged towards the window. He struggled with the creaky handle to open the window. A soft wind brought smog and noise inside their living room. In the old days, they would argue about the window but Sara was beyond caring. She just looked at Jack with vacant eyes and she knew. They were still married but their passionate marriage was long gone.