Anna232
Junior Member
- Joined
- Mar 17, 2024
- Member Type
- Teacher (Other)
- Native Language
- Georgian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
Are the parts marked by asterisks correct and natural?
I am talking about the government and people in my country.
1. They have more *relevant* problems for example *a* low income, *a* low level of education, *a* bad medicical service, awful *conditions of life*. Would this sentence be correct without the added articles? Can I use "relevant" instead of "important?"
2.Only after solving these problems people can *be involved in further development*of society. All aspects depend upon each other.
3.Without *a* good education we don't receive *a* good medical care. I added articles.
4.Without good salaries we cant pay all bills and in this way we have high crime rates. I can continue endlessly . I think it should be "that way."
5.So from my point of view if our goverment didn't divide our society so shardply into the weathly and the poor people, the part of happy people would be greater.
I am talking about the government and people in my country.
1. They have more *relevant* problems for example *a* low income, *a* low level of education, *a* bad medicical service, awful *conditions of life*. Would this sentence be correct without the added articles? Can I use "relevant" instead of "important?"
2.Only after solving these problems people can *be involved in further development*of society. All aspects depend upon each other.
3.Without *a* good education we don't receive *a* good medical care. I added articles.
4.Without good salaries we cant pay all bills and in this way we have high crime rates. I can continue endlessly . I think it should be "that way."
5.So from my point of view if our goverment didn't divide our society so shardply into the weathly and the poor people, the part of happy people would be greater.