sammyjankis
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I wrote the following passage, could anyone help pointing out my mistakes? thank you very much.:roll:
Although I cannot endorse this essentially - pogrom of non-ethnic Buddhists, it is highlighting again the great disparity in which people too easily conflate ethno-religious identity and religious identification. If the Muslim ethnic-Bengali diaspora were not so stubborn, this would not be this way; no excuse on part of the Burmese government, but this is a natural causation of the past treatment of Buddhists.
Although I cannot endorse this essentially - pogrom of non-ethnic Buddhists, it is highlighting again the great disparity in which people too easily conflate ethno-religious identity and religious identification. If the Muslim ethnic-Bengali diaspora were not so stubborn, this would not be this way; no excuse on part of the Burmese government, but this is a natural causation of the past treatment of Buddhists.