(not teacher)
Allow me rewrite this, teachers will correct your written later.
Have you ever suffered/frighten from being attacked by a poison snake? Ten years ago, we celebrated our anniversary at Rhode Island Camping with our family. Everything were as good as we plainned. When my wife was preparing breafast for our childrent, I saw something was moving under the table. I thought it was our dog, Barnyey, because he came with us too. Late on, when we were eating, I saw a snake moving to my child, Thomas. I yell out for him to run (teachers will reword this), but it was too late, the cobre having bitten him. My wife was shocked. We took him to a hospital. We thought that the chance to survive is very low. The doctor in the hospital told us that they would try to do everything, but they couldn't promise that our child would survive. Two hours later, a nurse said that our child survived from snake attack. I will never forget that day and I am grateful for God bless us.
Please correct mine too, thank you.