Nicole strode towards the beach.

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alpacinou

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Is this correct and natural?

Nicole strode towards the beach. A bench stood in solitude on a dune. It appeared to have been battered by the elements for years. She took a seat and gazed out at the sea. Pacific froth brushed the sand, and receded, tempting her to dip her toes in the mix of sand and foam.
 
I'd use "gazed out to sea".
 
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