alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Persian
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- Iran
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- Iran
Hello,
I have written these sentences to describe sunshine in the afternoon. Do they work? Which one is better?
1. The pale afternoon sun was shining through a hole.
2. The afternoon sun was shining palely through a hole.
I have written these sentences to describe sunshine in the afternoon. Do they work? Which one is better?
1. The pale afternoon sun was shining through a hole.
2. The afternoon sun was shining palely through a hole.