moon7296
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- Apr 22, 2011
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1. Clouds form and are pulled to the edges, creating the familiar funnel shape of a tornado.
Q1) Can the underline in #1 be rephrased as "Clouds form..., and created(#1) the familiar ...."? or "Clouds form..., and clouds(they) created(#2) the familiar...."? or "Clouds form..., which created(#3) the familiar ...."?
2. Eventually, a tonado develops touching down on the ground and potentially causing a great deal of death and destruction.
Q2) How can the underlines be rephrased? considering my question #1?
Q1) Can the underline in #1 be rephrased as "Clouds form..., and created(#1) the familiar ...."? or "Clouds form..., and clouds(they) created(#2) the familiar...."? or "Clouds form..., which created(#3) the familiar ...."?
2. Eventually, a tonado develops touching down on the ground and potentially causing a great deal of death and destruction.
Q2) How can the underlines be rephrased? considering my question #1?
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