[Essay] People are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon

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Hello guys. I'm newbie here. I need help with this essay maybe it's very tragic.

Today people are living to be much older than ever before. Some of the main reasons for this are the quality of food, people have more easily access to the medical help and cares about their body conditions.

People in the modern world have more products than before they can balance their diet for healthy eating. People get more money in work, so can buy a organic food.

Citizens could have medical services more easily. Medicine has been expanded to many diseases have been discovered medicament that's why incidence diseases is less. People cares about hygiene what too affect to reduction of diseases.

Last but not least important thing is that people care more their own health. Maybe it's fashionable but more and more people are starting active life. The results is greater resistance and longer life.
 

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