Luukim
New member
- Joined
- Oct 2, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Vietnamese
- Home Country
- Vietnam
- Current Location
- Vietnam
I have just finish this paragraph. But i can know whether i got any mistake or not, so please help me to correct what is wrong in that. thanks so much.
"I came to holy land on a morning Sunday. In front of me appreared a huge and breathtaking landscape which look like really heaven. The sky was deep blue with strip of white clouds stretching out. Far from the horizon, ranges of mountains which was covered by a deep green of trees followed each other rising upon the sky. There was a very limplid river quietly flew toward the horizon reflecting on surface the image of above sky. Running along two side of the river was many woods alternated each other. Dominating on that colourful picture, A little wood boat softly was sailing down the river. It look as if going to the end of the sky."
"I came to holy land on a morning Sunday. In front of me appreared a huge and breathtaking landscape which look like really heaven. The sky was deep blue with strip of white clouds stretching out. Far from the horizon, ranges of mountains which was covered by a deep green of trees followed each other rising upon the sky. There was a very limplid river quietly flew toward the horizon reflecting on surface the image of above sky. Running along two side of the river was many woods alternated each other. Dominating on that colourful picture, A little wood boat softly was sailing down the river. It look as if going to the end of the sky."