Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am not sure if this text is correct, please could you proofread these sentences.
He was distressed, having a premonition that the woman must have been suffering greatly far away from her homeland and her family. He wished he could blow up the concrete wall which separated them and give her a warm hug. He would comfort her with his compassion and listen to her worries with such patience as no other human being would be able to do.
He was distressed, having a premonition that the woman must have been suffering greatly far away from her homeland and her family. He wished he could blow up the concrete wall which separated them and give her a warm hug. He would comfort her with his compassion and listen to her worries with such patience as no other human being would be able to do.
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