redherring
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Hi, I have written the following paragraph on topic "Discuss the differences between the way of life in your country now and the way of life in the past". Please point out mistakes and errors.
"Pakistan has progressed in food industry since past 20 years. There are more restaurants and hotels than before. Variety of food is available easily including international cuisine as well as our national and continental food. Previously the menus of hotels were not so varying and only 5 star or 7 hotels served international cuisine but now it is easily available everywhere. There were only few international branches of fast food such as Mcdonalds and KFc in past but now many brands have come and opened their franchise here such as Burger King. As this progress has provided people an easy access to delicious food it has also affected peoples health in negative way. Now the obesity rate is increasing in youngsters. Diseases such as cholesterol ,diabetes and heart problems are more common than ever. People should enjoy the opportunity but they should also maintain a healthy life style by eating in balance."
"Pakistan has progressed in food industry since past 20 years. There are more restaurants and hotels than before. Variety of food is available easily including international cuisine as well as our national and continental food. Previously the menus of hotels were not so varying and only 5 star or 7 hotels served international cuisine but now it is easily available everywhere. There were only few international branches of fast food such as Mcdonalds and KFc in past but now many brands have come and opened their franchise here such as Burger King. As this progress has provided people an easy access to delicious food it has also affected peoples health in negative way. Now the obesity rate is increasing in youngsters. Diseases such as cholesterol ,diabetes and heart problems are more common than ever. People should enjoy the opportunity but they should also maintain a healthy life style by eating in balance."
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