Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
My favorite subject is science because everything around us concerns science. By learning science I learn how to study and learn, I learn all about the world that we live in, and science helps me to become less gullible. For example, if we learn the truth by learning science, we won't fall for all those scams, cons, hoaxes, and quack medicine schemes! Therefore, the study of science is essential.
My favorite subject is science because everything around us concerns science. By learning science I learn how to study and learn, I learn all about the world that we live in, and science helps me to become less gullible. For example, if we learn the truth by learning science, we won't fall for all those scams, cons, hoaxes, and quack medicine schemes! Therefore, the study of science is essential.