[Grammar] Sentence coherence

[KSSEEJ]

A high level bureau is needed for long term strategic planning, with enough budget and authority to co-ordinate different division to make plans a reality.

Is it better to separate it into two sentence as follow?

"A high level bureau is needed for long term strategic planning. It should carry enough budget and authority to co-ordinate different division to make plans a reality"

Or any better rewrite?

Thanks so much for any advice

 

[SlickVic9000]

(Not a Teacher)

Both seem fine to me. A thing or two I'd like to change though:

"....with enough budget and authority to coordinate different divisions and make plans a reality."