KSSEEJ
Junior Member
- Joined
- Sep 22, 2011
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
A high level bureau is needed for long term strategic planning, with enough budget and authority to co-ordinate different division to make plans a reality.
Is it better to separate it into two sentence as follow?
"A high level bureau is needed for long term strategic planning. It should carry enough budget and authority to co-ordinate different division to make plans a reality"
Or any better rewrite?
Thanks so much for any advice
Is it better to separate it into two sentence as follow?
"A high level bureau is needed for long term strategic planning. It should carry enough budget and authority to co-ordinate different division to make plans a reality"
Or any better rewrite?
Thanks so much for any advice