She was rich

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Untaught88

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Hi,

Please check my synthesis.

She was rich. She built a fine house.
a) She was rich and built a fine house.
b) She was rich, therefore she built a fine house.
 
I am not a teacher.

If she was rich and she built a fine house then, by definition, a) is OK.

b) is another kettle of fish. Was the building of a fine house the inevitable outcome of being rich, or do you mean that the house she built was fine because she was rich?
 
"Therefore" doesn't work there. The house was not an inevitable consequence of her wealth.
 
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