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The logic of "since then" appears to be questionable to me since it follows "today you'll see reminders of this history with statues and plaques".
Does it appear to be questionable to you native speakers too? Should the phrase "Since then, Laowai Jie has transformed greatly" be moved to follow "their...journeys" - put a period after the journeys, of course.
LaowaiJie (Shanghai) is pedestrian Lane 3338 off Hongmei Lu in Gubei District. During the days of communism, this area is where Chairman Mao’s 101 trains ended their cross-nation journeys, and today you’ll see reminders of this history with statues and plaques. Since then, LaowaiJie has transformed greatly.
Source:Top Eateries on Laowai Jie(老外街)in Shanghai
Does it appear to be questionable to you native speakers too? Should the phrase "Since then, Laowai Jie has transformed greatly" be moved to follow "their...journeys" - put a period after the journeys, of course.
LaowaiJie (Shanghai) is pedestrian Lane 3338 off Hongmei Lu in Gubei District. During the days of communism, this area is where Chairman Mao’s 101 trains ended their cross-nation journeys, and today you’ll see reminders of this history with statues and plaques. Since then, LaowaiJie has transformed greatly.
Source:Top Eateries on Laowai Jie(老外街)in Shanghai
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