spin web of lies.

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Boris Tatarenko

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I drew a parallel between English and Russian and I made upt this sentence:

He spins webs of lies, but he can get entangled there by himself.

It sounds quite awkward to me.

First of all, I don't like using "spin webs of lies" towards a man.
Secondly, I don't think "get entangled there by himself" makes any sense.

Can you improve my sentence? If it's correct, I'll be happy.:-D

Thanks in advance.
 
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HugoJ

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He would eventually be overwhelmed by the torrent of lies he spread.

Something along these lines maybe?

I'm not a teacher.
 

MikeNewYork

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I would change it to: "He spins webs of lies and often/sometimes gets entangled in them himself.
 
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