Boris Tatarenko
Senior Member
- Joined
- May 6, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
I drew a parallel between English and Russian and I made upt this sentence:
He spins webs of lies, but he can get entangled there by himself.
It sounds quite awkward to me.
First of all, I don't like using "spin webs of lies" towards a man.
Secondly, I don't think "get entangled there by himself" makes any sense.
Can you improve my sentence? If it's correct, I'll be happy.:-D
Thanks in advance.
He spins webs of lies, but he can get entangled there by himself.
It sounds quite awkward to me.
First of all, I don't like using "spin webs of lies" towards a man.
Secondly, I don't think "get entangled there by himself" makes any sense.
Can you improve my sentence? If it's correct, I'll be happy.:-D
Thanks in advance.
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