Take a action for each plan that you set it up.

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Is the following sentence correct and natural?

Take a action for each plan that you set it up.
 

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Even with my changes, it is not vert natural.

My correction is below, is it correct now?

Take an action for each plan that you set up.
 

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My correction new version is below. Is it correct now?

Take an action for each plan that you set up.
That sentence is grammatical but it means nothing. What are you trying to say? Please explain it in a different way.
 

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That sentence is grammatical but it means nothing. What are you trying to say? Please explain it in a different way.
I am talking about I have created a plan and wanted to implement it.
 

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Put it simply: carry out every plan you make.
 

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I am talking about a plan I have created a plan and I wanted to implement it.
If you're talking about yourself, why did you use "you" in the original? The original sentence is an imperative - you're telling other people what they should do, not talking about something you want to do.
 

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If you're talking about yourself, why did you use "you" in the original? The original sentence is an imperative - you're telling other people what they should do, not talking about something you want to do.
I am standing in front of the mirror and try to talk to myself. I try to encourage myself to do better today.
 

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I am standing in front of the mirror and trying to talk to myself. I am trying to encourage myself to do better today.
Say "Make a plan and put it into action!"
 
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