[Grammar] The biomass reduced 10% under A1 compared to A2

[MK22]

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"The biomass reduced 10% under A1 compared to A2 on average that shows the negative effects of salinity. Earlier researchers also demonstrated crop’s biological yield reduction under salinity stress. Due to the mentioned reasons in the previous section about salinity."

 

[teechar]

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

No. None of them is grammatical.

"The biomass reduced 10% under A1 compared to A2 on average that shows the negative effects of salinity.

The underlined part doesn't make sense. Explain it using other words. Also, what are "A1" and "A2"?

Earlier researchers also demonstrated crop’s biological yield reduction under salinity stress.

Are you talking about a specific (particular) crop?

This is due to the [STRIKE]mentioned[/STRIKE] reasons mentioned in the previous section about salinity."

See above.

 

[MK22]

Yes, It is a slice of a text.

 

[Rover_KE]

Who wrote it?

 

[teechar]

Yes, it is [STRIKE]a slice of[/STRIKE] an excerpt (from a text).

That doesn't answer my questions above.

 

[MK22]

Thanks. actually, this is a scientific text. A1 and A2 are two different options in an experiment.

 

[MK22]

Who wrote it?

myself

 

[Rover_KE]

In that case, ask in post #1 'Are the following sentences of mine correct?'

This will save us the trouble of asking you for the source.