The finishes of the terry towels supplied seem to be very coarse texture

[PRD2021]

The finishes of the terry towels supplied seem to be very coarse texture and not the same as the ones supplied earlier for the spa area.
Since they have mentioned the same details (GSM) for both areas, they should have been supplied in same terry finish like soft and plush terry towels supplied earlier for the spa area.

 

[Rover_KE]

What is your question, PRD2921?

 

[emsr2d2]

While we wait to find out what your question is, @PRD2021, please note that I have improved your thread title. A single word isn't enough. Give us complete phrases or sentences you want us to read.

 

[PRD2021]

What is your question, PRD2921?

Sorry I forgot to mention the question.

Please tell me are the above sentences grammatically correct?

 

[emsr2d2]

Sorry. I forgot to mention the ask a question.

Please tell me if are the above sentences are grammatically correct.

 

[emsr2d2]

The finishes of the terry towels supplied seem to be very coarse texture and not the same as unlike the ones supplied earlier previously for the spa area.
Since they have mentioned the same details (GSM) for both areas, they should have been supplied in same terry finish like soft and plush terry towels supplied earlier for the spa area.

The second paragraph is very repetitive and doesn't add anything useful to the information in the first paragraph. Also, who are "they" in "they have mentioned" and what does "GSM" mean?

 

[PRD2021]

The second paragraph is very repetitive and doesn't add anything useful to the information in the first paragraph. Also, who are "they" in "they have mentioned" and what does "GSM" mean?

GSM stands for weight in grams per square meter. "they" are supplier. I have reworded the second sentence as follows.

As per the quotaion provided, the towels should have been supplied in 700 GSM, but they were supplied in very coarse, not soft and plush finish as specified.

 

[Tarheel]

GSM stands for weight in grams per square meter, and "they" are the supplier. I have reworded the second sentence as follows.

As per the quotation provided, the towels should have been supplied in 700 GSM, but they were supplied in a very coarse, not soft and plush finish as specified.

OK.

 

[tedmc]

Simpler still:

The towels supplied are very coarse and not 720 gsm as specified (in the quotation) which is soft and plush.