The very strong sense of....(33 words)

[Silverobama]

Please help me to make the following paragraph natural:

The very strong sense of inferiority keeps embittering/encroaching me, telling me I'm worth nothing. But there's also another voice consoling me to pick myself up, saying that you're loved and you'll be loved.

I wrote this after the woman I wanted to date refused to hang out with me anymore. I gradually became fond of her and for the first few days, I was feeling very very sad. I demeaned myself to be a no-hoper. But meanwhile, I encouraged myself by telling myself that I'm loved by my parents and many other people. I'll be loved by a woman in the future.

 

[teechar]

The very strong sense of inferiority keeps embittering /encroaching me, telling me I'm worth nothing. But there's also another voice consoling me to pick myself up,

See above.

saying that you're I am loved and you'll I'll be loved.

or

saying that "you're loved and you'll be loved".

I wrote this after the woman I wanted to date refused to hang out with me anymore. I had gradually became become fond of her and for the first few days after she broke it off, I was feeling very very sad. I demeaned thought of myself to be as a no-hoper. But meanwhile, I encouraged myself by telling myself that I'm loved by my parents and many other people. I'll be loved by a some woman in the future.

See above.