Silverobama
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Hi.
I went to a shopping mall yesterday. I noticed that the mall has three doors/entrances. [STRIKE]for people to going into it[/STRIKE]. At each entrance, there's a machine that can detect people's temperature. I wrote "There's an ultra-red temperature machine at every entrance of the mall".
I wonder if the sentence is natural.
I went to a shopping mall yesterday. I noticed that the mall has three doors/entrances. [STRIKE]for people to going into it[/STRIKE]. At each entrance, there's a machine that can detect people's temperature. I wrote "There's an ultra-red temperature machine at every entrance of the mall".
I wonder if the sentence is natural.
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