[Grammar] This video shows the bad ending since not enough keys were collected ...

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How about:

It is hard to tell if the player wins or loses when the final result is undecisive​?

Don't put a space before a question mark. It should be noted that "undecisive" is not commonly used, in BrE at least. My spellchecker underlines it and I had to look it up to check it was even a word. It's generally shown as "alternative spelling of indecisive".
 
Does this sound better?

It is hard to tell if the player wins or loses when getting an unsatisfactory ending.

Not greatly to me- an unsatisfactory ending is clear enough to me.
 
Not greatly to me- an unsatisfactory ending is clear enough to me.

What do you mean?

In the post you quoted, I did have used the term "an unsatisfactory ending". :-?
 
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What do you mean?

In the post you quoted, I did [STRIKE]have used[/STRIKE] use the term "an unsatisfactory ending". :-?

See above. "did have used" is wrong. Say either "did use" (if you need that emphasis) or just "used".
 
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