Silverobama
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- Aug 8, 2010
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Hi.
The Mid-Autumn festival is around the corner. I've been busy making mooncakes. Unfortunately, I failed twice and today I started the third times. I said to my friend "Today would be my third trials of mooncake making, wish me good luck".
Is my italic sentence natural?
Edited: Today would will be my third trials of try at mooncake-making. Wish me (good) luck.
The Mid-Autumn festival is around the corner. I've been busy making mooncakes. Unfortunately, I failed twice and today I started the third times. I said to my friend "Today would be my third trials of mooncake making, wish me good luck".
Is my italic sentence natural?
Edited: Today would will be my third trials of try at mooncake-making. Wish me (good) luck.
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