usage of the word everyone

[Heidi L]

The lives of everyone who come to him are changed forever. https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&sou...sQFnoECAgQAg&usg=AOvVaw2lu93Ii1WeD0YivF2ODWLX

Is the above sentence grammatically correct?

Thank you.

 

[emsr2d2]

The [STRIKE]lives[/STRIKE] life of everyone who comes to him [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] is changed forever. https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&sou...sQFnoECAgQAg&usg=AOvVaw2lu93Ii1WeD0YivF2ODWLX

Is the above sentence grammatically correct?

Thank you.

The uncountable "everyone" takes the third person singular verb form. I'd use "life" and "is" in that sentence because each person involved has just one life.

 

[Tdol]

The original doesn't bother me greatly.

 

[emsr2d2]

The original doesn't bother me greatly.

Not even "everyone come"?