alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
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- Iran
Hello
I intend to describe this lady's hair in a poetic fashion:
I intend to use the river metaphor and then the cascade one. I have seen cascade used for describing women's hair a lot.
My question is, does my sentence work?
Two interwoven golden river of braids flow through two sides of her head as if to conjoin in the back of her head and fall down in a cascade.
If this sentence does not work, how can I use the river metaphor in the correct way?
I intend to describe this lady's hair in a poetic fashion:
I intend to use the river metaphor and then the cascade one. I have seen cascade used for describing women's hair a lot.
My question is, does my sentence work?
Two interwoven golden river of braids flow through two sides of her head as if to conjoin in the back of her head and fall down in a cascade.
If this sentence does not work, how can I use the river metaphor in the correct way?