Please check my grammar in the following sentences.
We received your payment today. (space after a full stop) [STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] We [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] will [STRIKE]make the shipment[/STRIKE] send your product by Monday.
[STRIKE]Once this has been shipped[/STRIKE] We will let you know the shipment details once it's on its way. [STRIKE]of the shipment[/STRIKE].
Welcome to the forum. :hi:
I have changed your thread title. "Grammar check" is not an appropriate title. Titles should include some/all of the words/phrases you are asking us about. Put your actual question/request in the main body of the post. I have added it for you above.
It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular pronoun).
- Always capitalise proper nouns (Monday, English, Microsoft etc).
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
Your sentences are quite short and there is no natural flow between them. I have corrected them so they are grammatical but they could still be improved. What product are you sending the customer?
