We were just having fun

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alpacinou

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Is this correct and natural?

We were just having fun. It was hard to say who was playing who but it was all a game until it wasn't. Until things got out of hand and we fell for each other.
 
We were just having fun. It was hard to say who was playing who, but it was all a game until it wasn't. That is, until things got out of hand, and we fell for each other.
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I would expect "when things got out of hand" to mean somebody got hurt.
 
How about "until we got serious/sobered up"?
 
Things took an unexpected turn. We fell for each other.
 
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