learning101
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Hi all,
I struggle with the phrase "What make the trip more appealing was...". Please correct me if my sentence is wrong:
"What made the trip even more appealing was the brief respite they were granted from the continuous rain that had made all outdoor activities impossible where they got to do a bit of outing to vent the frustration that had build up throughout the days. "
What I meant was they couldn't be more excited when the rain finally stopped and they got to do a bit of outing.
I struggle with the phrase "What make the trip more appealing was...". Please correct me if my sentence is wrong:
"What made the trip even more appealing was the brief respite they were granted from the continuous rain that had made all outdoor activities impossible where they got to do a bit of outing to vent the frustration that had build up throughout the days. "
What I meant was they couldn't be more excited when the rain finally stopped and they got to do a bit of outing.