alpacinou
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I'm trying to describe a musical performance. The performance is a woman with long hair. As she plays, strands of her hair move with her.
Does this sentence work?
She was at the piano playing with panache. Locks of Janet's hair moved with her head as she swayed to the crescendo.
I mean she swayed until the music reached a crescendo.
What can I use instead of "move"? I want something a bit more poetic. Her hair moves gently on her shoulder.
Does this sentence work?
She was at the piano playing with panache. Locks of Janet's hair moved with her head as she swayed to the crescendo.
I mean she swayed until the music reached a crescendo.
What can I use instead of "move"? I want something a bit more poetic. Her hair moves gently on her shoulder.