[Grammar] Which sentence sounds better?

[Snappy]

Which one of the following sentences sounds better?

Participants’ constructive exchanges of views made the Conference a place of fruitful discussions.

Participants’ constructive discussion made the Conference very fruitful.

Thank you in advance for your advice.

 

[chellamuthu]

Which one of the following sentences sounds better?

Participants’ constructive exchanges of views made the Conference a place of fruitful discussions.

Participants’ constructive discussion made the Conference very fruitful.

Thank you in advance for your advice.

HI snappy

Though I am not a teacher, I feel the second one sounds better.

It is very simple and conveys the same meaning.


regards!

 

[sarat_106]

Which one of the following sentences sounds better?

Participants’ constructive exchanges of views made the Conference a place of fruitful discussions.

Participants’ constructive discussions made the Conference very fruitful.

Thank you in advance for your advice.

The second is better but use plural form of 'discussion'.