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please helping
Hello, how can i answer these questions?
A. Revise the senteces to eliminate dangling modifiers and do not revise any correct sentence.
1- Ready to pitch camp , the windstorm hit.
2- The convicts did not yield , thinking they could attract the support of the prees.
3- Burned to the ground , the Welches had to build a new house.
B.Combine the tow sentences in each item into a single sentence. Use an appropriately placed verbal phrase or elliptical clause as an introductory parenthetical element.
1- I turned on the flashers and lifted the hood . A speeding motorist, i thought , midht slow down , see my predicament, and offer me a ride.
thank you
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Re: please helping

Originally Posted by
the killer
Hello, how can i answer these questions?
A. Revise the senteces to eliminate dangling modifiers and do not revise any correct sentence.
1- Ready to pitch camp , the windstorm hit.
2- The convicts did not yield , thinking they could attract the support of the prees.
3- Burned to the ground , the Welches had to build a new house.
B.Combine the tow sentences in each item into a single sentence. Use an appropriately placed verbal phrase or elliptical clause as an introductory parenthetical element.
1- I turned on the flashers and lifted the hood . A speeding motorist, i thought , midht slow down , see my predicament, and offer me a ride.
thank you
Your best plan is to follow the advice given when you posted this a few days ago. Have you read it? I gave you explicit instructions about how to do this.
All you are doing here is posting the questions that I and others have not answered for you.
It's time you did your own work now.
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Re: please helping
hello , please i want an advise not answers .
I wish to give me correction for the sentences.
1-You should be ready to pitch camp , the windstorm hit.
2-The police did not take the convicts,thinking they could attract the support of the prees.
3-After their house was burned to the ground,the Welches had to build a new house.
B- 1.1- I turned on the flashers and lifted the hood , i thought a speeding motorist might slow down and see my predicament and then offer me a ride.
thank for all, especially Raymott.
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