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"Potatoes are fattening" diagram
"Potatoes can add more pounds than soft drinks."
Would you kindly Reed-Kellogg?
Thank you very much.
James
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Re: "Potatoes are fattening" diagram
This question doesn't make any sense to me.
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Originally Posted by
TheParser
"Potatoes can add more pounds than soft drinks."
Would you kindly Reed-Kellogg?
Here comes nothing.

Hope you like it. Note the relative freedom of "more" to move around "pounds". 

Originally Posted by
TheParser
Thank you very much.
You are welcome.
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Re: "Potatoes are fattening" diagram
I still do not have this computer set up to diagram, but I think that "more...than" is a correlative conjunction and would not be diagrammed as you have done it.
"Than" by itself is not a conjunction here.
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Originally Posted by
Frank Antonson
I still do not have this computer set up to diagram, but I think that "more...than" is a correlative conjunction and would not be diagrammed as you have done it.
"Than" by itself is not a conjunction here.
Welcome back, Mr. Antonson.
Your remarks were very insightful. I found a similar sentence on
Mr. Eugene R. Moutoux's diagramming website: "We humans get more
bonus points for penitence than we get for kindness."
He analyzes it as:
We humans get more bonus points for penitence than we get many/some
bonus points for kindness.
He shows "than" modifying the understood "many/some."
I believe that is how our heroes, Professors House and Harman, would
diagram it, too.
James
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James,
I (we) am (are) SOOOO hampered by our present inability to R-K online.
I cannot understand "than" to modify "many" or "some" -- e.g. "than many" or "than some" ??? Rather "more... than many can".
I'm not too sure about this, but from your description, I think Moutoux MAY have this wrong.
Correlative conjunctions are REALLT cool -- the way they work.
Frank
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Originally Posted by
Frank Antonson
James,
I (we) am (are) SOOOO hampered by our present inability to R-K online.
I cannot understand "than" to modify "many" or "some" -- e.g. "than many" or "than some" ??? Rather "more... than many can".
I'm not too sure about this, but from your description, I think Moutoux MAY have this wrong.
Correlative conjunctions are REALLT cool -- the way they work.
Frank
Thank you for your note.
I know that if anyone else is reading this thread, they must be
wondering: why does anyone care about such a matter?
Well, we do, don't we!!!
According to the great diagrams in Descriptive English Grammar, the
"many" is justified because it is the positive of the comparative
"more"
in the main clause.
For example, Professors House and Harman explain that "Tom is taller
than Mona" = "Tom is taller (more tall) than Mona is tall." I notice,
however, that the redoubtable Professor Quirk does NOT buy this view.
James
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