Analysing and diagramming sentences (my way).

:-D I am leaning toward structuring sentences (my way). That way, is the subject of the letter is the description of the whole piece. To make a point or points I put them in (Italics to be understood separately). If I need more clarification I use Wikipedia. Not only do I clarify within the sentences I save space instead of lengthening the piece.

I will not need bullets or numbered lists. I do not believe in perfect grammar, but to get the closest I can get to be understood. Please critique this letter. Any advice will be greatly appreciated. pljames@att.net